Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Stratosphere

I bounced up into the stratosphere

Fearless

Laughing

Breathing

The splendour of freedom has a sublime substance.

6 comments:

  1. I like the bouncing quality that is evokes through this poem’s structure. Freedom is let out.

    Bouncing, such a wonderful onomatopoeic word.

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  2. That's euphoria! Thank you for this one.

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  3. I can feel it! Thank you for your lovely words.

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  4. Hey VW. I got a ew computer and can finally leave comments for you again. it feels so long since i've een ale to comment on so many blogs... Hope your move is going well and look forward to seeing more of your poetry soon xx

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